第一篇：aorb觀點選擇型作文
A or B觀點選擇型作文
作文套路一： A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, form my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that ____________________. 就理由進行解釋 _______________________. For instance, ________________________. Another reason can be seen by every one is that ____________________. 就理由進行解釋 _______________________. For example, ________________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _____________________________________________________. Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as _____________________. In a word, _______________________________________________________. So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
作文套路二： A or B
將原題復述______________________________________________________When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would deem that ______________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/B-, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________ is that ________. The second reason can be seen by every person that ________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that ________. There are some disadvantages in ________另一種觀點的缺點______. In a wore, ________重復觀點句并縮寫理由________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.
作文套路三： 單一命題式
The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point of view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it sagacious to ________. Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for _______ is that _______. Another reason can be seen by every person is that _______. Furthermore, ________. In short, ________復述前文中的理由_______.
作文套路四： agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _______. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would
explore only a few primary ones here. The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant of the basic fact that _______解釋本段中心_______。
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that _______. What is more, some students are interested in _______. In a word, _______.
作文文套五： A or B
Some people prefer to A. others believe B. when faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why _______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.
The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that _______. Take _______ as example, _______. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as _______. Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _______. (examples: _______). From the above you might got idea that I agree _______. (repeat the above three reasons_______). So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______.
作文文套六： Agree or disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that _______, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that _______. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. One of the primary causes is that _______. Examples _______. But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples. What is more _______. Examples _______. General speaking, _______. Recognizing the fact that _______ should drive us to conclude that _______.
作文文套七： A or B
From my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than, B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among countless factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example, _______ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance, _______. It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important. B ____也好___. In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.
作文文套八： A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, foremost reason for B is _____. For example, _____. Also, _____.
This is arbitrary to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that _____.
Admittedly, _____A也有好的地方_____. By he same token, however, _____B更好____. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.
作文文套九：
When it comes to _____, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation since _____. Naturally _____ . It can be given a concrete example _____ .
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of _____ is that. Obviously _____ . Take the case of a thing that _____.
Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that _____. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that _____.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, _____ 此處論述B的1-2優點_____.
But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that _____.
作文文套十：
_____改寫并復述題目_____. There may be one or two disadvantages to _____; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to _____ is that _____. For instance, _____. Another drawback to _____ involves the possibility that _____. For example, _____. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to _____, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for _____ is that _____. For example, _____. Another reason for my inclination for _____ is that _____. For example, _____. In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____, I feel that the advantages are more obvious _____重復優點_____. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____.
作文文套十二： A or B _____改寫并復述題目_____. The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why _____, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones
here. One of the primary cause is that _____ _____.
What is also worth noticing fact is that _____ _____. Furthermore, _____ _____. Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to _____ I fell that the advantages are more obvious _________. _________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that ________.
作文文套十三： A or B _____(改寫和復述原題)_____. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _______, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _____, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ______is that _______. Another reason can be seen by every person is that _________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because __________. In a word, __________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _______________.
作文文套十四： A or B From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ______ is that ______. There is another factor that deserves some words here. In a word, _______________. While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think _____________.
作文文十五： agree or disagree Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that _____________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that __________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that __________ without reservation since ________. Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that _________. In a word, ____________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that __________.
第二篇：英語作文;議論文的框架1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型).
英語作文模板; 議論文的框架1 不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)議論文的框架 (1 不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一
或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
第三篇：如何選擇美國投資移民項目-金北方移民觀點
據金北方移民網了解，截止到今年10月，美移民局批準的區域中心數達419個，而每個區域中心或多或少有幾個不同的項目在推廣，面對名目繁多的區域中心投資項目，如何做出明智的選擇將是投資人邁向成功的第一步。以下為金北方移民專家總結的關于投資者如何在眾多的移民項目中選擇適合自己的項目。 第一，一個公司同一時期不可能代理太多項目。
如果代理項目太多，這個公司沒有那么多精力去核實每個項目，做所謂的“盡職調查”。不做調查，公司選項目與你自己選項目沒區別。 所以我喜歡那種比較專一的移民公司。
第二，如果顧問跟你宣傳“政府擔保，或者政府支持，州長。。。”，千萬別信。
這是拿中國的思維想外國的事騙中國人的錢。美國都是靠法律說事的。 州長就是一個公務員，他不能、也不會為了一個商業項目去擔保、去違反規定或者法律。 這種項目通常沒有什么拿得出手的優勢，全靠忽悠。我去過美國，也和在美國的朋友聊過，感覺在美國做生意就是踏踏實實的做好生意，這種最穩妥。第三，盡量選擇有經驗的團隊開發的項目。
例如，有的項目分成幾期招募投資者，如果以前階段的投資人已經獲得I-526批準，說明項目的結構基本沒有問題?？赡苡腥苏J為這不應該是問題，實際上有可能是個大問題。 我在初期曾經咨詢某移民公司參與的某酒店項目，他們做移民很有經驗了，但是最近傳出這個項目的申請都被拒了(具體信息請搜索網上，我不確定這個消息是否100%正確)，說明是項目的構造不符合EB-5要求。 否則不會全部被拒。第四，永遠不要信“這個項目沒有風險”。
這說明中介公司根本就沒有對項目進行分析與調查。 如果沒有風險，就已經違反了移民法，所以被拒是注定的。但事實是，沒有商業項目會讓投資人的資金沒有風險。
金北方移民認為：根據以上這些原則，在某一時期可選的項目并不多。您可能好奇了，我到底選的是哪個項目呢?這里金北方移民專家推薦您美國CMB區域中心項目，該區域中心為最早的區域中心之一，，目前I-526及I-829的通過率均為100%;已經有超過800 位申請人通過I-526批準 ;已有超過100位申請人通過I-829批準。了解更多項目情況歡迎咨詢4006183080或者致電010-58673080，我們的顧問專家會一對一的跟據客戶情況定制VIP移民方案。
第四篇：觀點論證型作文
觀點論證型作文通常是提出一種觀點或現象，要求考生對這一觀點或現象進行解釋或論證，體裁多為議論文。這種題型常見的結構模式是： 第一段：提出某種觀點或現象。
第二段：論證該觀點或現象的正確性或危害性。
第三段：結論，再次強調主題，或表明自己的態度、做法。
常用模板(一)
It is true that___________.(普遍的觀點) However,__________.(不同的觀點/現象) I think_______________.(“我”的觀點)The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, __________.(論據一) Secondly, ____________.(論據二) For example,_______________.(支持論據二的事例) Thirdly, ______________.(論據三) A case in point is _______________.(支持論據三的事例) It goes without saying/There is no doubt that _______________.(重申觀點) Therefore, ___________. (與該觀點相符合的做法)In a word,___________.(總結全文)
舉例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 每個人都想獲得財富，財富似乎就是幸福 2. 其實世界上有許多東西是財富換不來的。
Wealth and Happiness
It is true that wealth has always been what people long for. However, wealth doesn’t necessarily mean happiness in today’s world. I think this is reasonable. The reasons can be listed as follows.
Firstly, good health, which can not be bought with money, also plays an important role in a happy life. Secondly, wealth may encourage those weak—willed people to be addicted to some harmful habits and bring about their own ruin. For example, some people spend money on drugs and gambling which in turn make them having nothing. Thirdly, there are something that are indispensable but priceless. A case in point is love.
There is no doubt that wealth is not equal to happiness. Therefore, we should not attach to much importance to wealth. In a word, we should earn money with honest work, but not be crazy about money.
常用模板(二)
Many people believe that _____________.(社會現象/事實現象) The true is deep and profound. As we know,______________.(具體闡述觀點的正確性的表現一) In addition, _______________.(具體闡述觀點的正確性的表現二)
There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is
1 ___________.(闡述第一個例子) This is close to suggest _______________.(總結例一，通過舉例得出觀點正確) For another example, _______.(引出并說明第二個例子) Moreover, _______________.(列舉支持論點的具體事例三)
All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(總結上文，重申論點) But (one thing we have to notice is that______________.(提出個人建議) In short,_________.(總結全文，再次強調觀點的重要性或正確性)
舉例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 怎樣理解“有志者事竟成” 2. 試舉例說明
Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way
Many people believe the proverb “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”. The true is deep and profound. As we know, as long as a person possesses a strong will he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is. In addition, if he persists, he will eventually succeed.
There are numerous examples supporting this argument. A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect from the people all over the world. This is close to suggest that strong will is vital factor to one’s final success. For another example, Cao Xueqin met lots of hardship in his pursuit for literature, but finally completed the world famous book Dreams of Red Chamber. Moreover, among us college students, those who persist studying hard and make it eventually are also good examples.
All mentioned above tell us that if we wish to succeed, we first have a resolution and remember the saying “Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way”. But one thing we have to notice is that a strong will must be accompanied by a right direction, which shouldn’t be blind. In short, whatever you do, please remember: Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way.
常用模板(三) It is well known that ___________.(開門見山，直接提出論點)The truth is self—evident. No one can deny that ______________.(進一步以我們所知道的道理闡述觀點) Therefore, _____________________.(總結第一段，強調要論證的觀點) Many remarkable factors / reasons contribute to this argument. First of all, ___________.(列舉論證理由一) For example, _____________.(舉例說明理由一) What’s more, ________________. (列舉論證理由二)Besides, ______________________.(列舉論證理由三) All mentioned above tell us that _____________.(承接上文，重申觀點) Therefore, there is no denying that ________________.(得出結論或應該采取的做法) In short, _________________.(總結全文，再次強調觀點的正確性或重要性)
2 舉例：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Improving the Chinese People’s English Level. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 提高全民族英語素質的必要性 2. 分析其原因 3. 你的看法
Improving the Chinese People’s English Level It is well known that the importance of grasping English is overemphasized in China. The truth of it is self—evident. No one can deny that English is quite important to us college students. Therefore, improving Chinese people’s overall English level is quite necessary and urgent. Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument. First of all, with the good command of English, we can better communicate with people from different countries and learn from them to improve ourselves. For example, since more foreigners come to China, and more Chinese go abroad, it is becoming urgent for us to study English well, or we will have difficulties in understanding each other. What’s more, with good knowledge of English, we can take in more advanced technology and management experience, which is very important for our modernization construction. Besides, our nation needs a large number of experts who have a good command of foreign languages. All mentioned above tell us that English is of much importance in every respect of china’s development. Therefore, there is no doubt that every one of us should do our best to improve our English quality and get prepared for the coming challenges and opportunities. In short, improving the Chinese people’s English level is a necessity for China’s development in the future.
常用句型：
● 引出格言的常用舉例
1) One of the early writers/famous scientists/ancient philosophers said that …
2) Here is an old saying,…. It is the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today. 3) Many years ago, a writer/scientist/philosopher remarked(/pointed out/commented) : “…” His words reveals / reflects a truth that…. ● 舉例說明的常用句型： 1) Take … for example,… 2) A good case in point is …
3) Perhaps the most important/telling/dramatic/striking example of … is…
4) I can think of no better illustration of the idea/view than the fact/example/case of ... ●事實證明的常用句型：
1) No one can deny/doubt/ignore the fact that …
2) We must face/accept/admit/point out the fact that…
3) It brings out/sets fort/reveals/demonstrates a(n) important(unquestionable) fact
3 that …
4) There is strong/sufficient/considerable evidence that/to show that/as to/against/in favor of …
5) Personal experience / case in history suggest that…. ●深入闡述的過渡常用句型：
1)But that’s only part of the story/explanation. Perhaps the most significant / remarkable / surprising about … is …. 2) Another equally important / essential role (aspect/function/consideration) is…. 3)… is but one of many effects/aspects. Another is …
4) Besides, / In addition to this, / Apart from this, another way/aspect is … ●結論性結尾的常用句型：
1) From what has been discussed above, / Taking into account all these factors, / Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely/reasonably arrive at( come to / reach / draw) the conclusion that …
2) The evidence upon all sides / analysis we have made / reasons we have advanced confirms( points to / leads to) an unshakable conclusion that …. 3) In summary/conclusion/a word/short, it is more important/valuable …
Assignments:
一.觀點論證型作文訓練：
Directions: For this part, you allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Making a Public Speech. You should write at least 120 words(CET-4) or 150 words(CET-6) and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 演講能力對大學生來說很重要 2. 試論證該觀點
二.應用文作文訓練：
1.四級同學完成Test 6 的寫作 2.六級同學完成Test 7的寫作
第五篇：高考作文觀點相反
他山之石，可以攻玉
高考作文訓練之
觀點相反的組合型材料作文的審題立意
一、作文例題
1.閱讀下面這則材料，寫一篇文章。
尼采曾說，處世之道應該是：不要爬到山頂去，也不要站在山腳，從半高處去看，這個世界真美好。
杜甫說：會當凌絕頂，一覽眾山小。
審題立意：
這是一道組合型材料作文。無論是尼采還是杜甫，都是以山為喻來談處世之道。這是兩則材料在話題上的共同點。但在觀點上兩者則是截然不同的，尼采主張從半高處看世界，杜甫主張站在山頂看世界。到底該站在哪里看世界呢?
可以從以下角度立意：
立意角度一：站在半山腰看，世界最美好 俯視走過的路，我們會為我們的勇氣和智慧驚嘆，我們會為我們取得的成績而驕傲;仰視山頂，我們會為山頂壯麗的景觀而著迷，從而信心滿懷繼續攀登。
立意角度二：站在山頂看，世界最美好
經過奮力登攀，終于到達了山頂，放眼望去，一切都盡收眼底。作為過來人的我們，心胸開闊，頭腦清醒，不受蒙蔽，步入了人生的最高境界，這個時候看到的一切，又怎么會不美好?
立意角度三：站在哪里看世界不是最重要的，最重要的是無論站在哪里，都能發現世界的美好。
也就是說，只要能夠發現世界的美好，不管選擇什么立足點來觀察欣賞，都是值得肯定的。
2.【2012廣東】閱讀下面的文字，根據要求作文。
醉心于古文化研究的英國歷史學家湯因比曾經說過，如果可以選擇出生的時代與地點，他愿意出生在公元一世紀的中國新疆，因為當時那里處于佛教文化、印度文化、希臘文化、波斯文化和中國文化等多種文化的交匯地帶。
居里夫人在寫給外甥女涵娜的信上說：“你寫信對我說，你愿意生在一世紀以前……伊雷娜則對我肯定地說過，她寧可生得晚些，生在未來的世紀里。我以為，人們在每一個時期都可以過有趣而且有用的生活。”
上面的材料引發了你怎樣的思考?請結合自己的體驗與感悟，寫一篇文章。
審題立意：
將兩段文字結合起來解讀，主要談論“時代與生活”的話題。湯因比、涵娜、伊雷娜三人的看法是一致的，他們認為，時代影響著人的生活，生活在什么樣的時代，就會有什么樣的生活。而居里夫人卻與三人的看法相反，“人們在每一個時期都可以過有趣而且有用的生活”。
可以在符合材料表層意的引申義中自選角度，„„“引申義”立意角度有：
1 他山之石，可以攻玉
1、由湯因比、涵娜、伊雷娜的選擇，引申出“時代與生活”的話題，由此話題引出相關觀點。如：選擇生活在唐代、活在當下、論改革開放時代與80后人的生活觀、哪個時代的人生活最幸福，等等。
2、由居里夫人的話，引申出“人與生活”的話題，由此話題引出相關觀點。如：我的生活我做主、有趣而且有用的生活靠我們創建、21世紀，我們應該具有怎樣的生活態度，等等。
以上兩道材料作文題從其本質看同屬觀點相反的組合型材料作文，這類作文題的共同特征是：
1、題目中材料涉及的話題是相同的。如第一道作文題兩則材料的共同話題是“站在哪里看世界”，廣東高考作文則是的“時代與生活”。
2、在此共同話題的基礎上，對這個問題有著兩種截然不同的看法。如第一道作文題“從半高處去看世界”與“會當凌絕頂，一覽眾山小”。 廣東高考作文“時代影響著人的生活”與“人們在每一個時期都可以過有趣而且有用的生活”。
3、這類作文的立意可以取兩個不同觀點的任意一個作為切入角度。
要注意兩點：
1、有人問，取兩個觀點中的一個來寫，是否意味著審題可以不必理會另一則材料? 答曰：不可以，要兩則材料結合起來才能看出共同的話題范圍，而文章內容是要在這一話題范圍之內的。如有學生提煉出這樣的觀點：低調做人高調做事，顯然偏題了，是只注意一則材料的結果。
2、要注意這種觀點相反的組合型作文題與并列式話題作文如“仰望星空與腳踏實地”的區別。“仰望星空與腳踏實地”這一話題中包含了兩種不同觀點，寫作時是兩方面都要涉及到的;而觀點相反的組合型作文題只要持其中一種觀點展開論證即可，對另一觀點則不必一定要提及。
二、作文審題：
非洲諺語強調“但”后面的內容，即：一個人不可能走得很遠，一群人才能走得更遠。它告訴人們：做事要有合作、團隊意識;眾人智慧勝于個體力量;成功來自集體的團結、協作努力。席慕容的話強調個體走自己的路的重要性和必要性，人生之路有些地方可以依靠別人，但有些路必須自己單獨去走、體驗，即使路上有坎坷、挫折，也要堅持走下去，因為，這是人生必走之路，不可缺少、無法替代的成長之路。
兩則材料說法各有側重，可以把兩則材料綜合起來思考，也可以立足一則，兼顧另一則思考，但不能完全把兩則材料對立起來看待、理解。
三、他山之石
孤獨的人是高貴的
2 他山之石，可以攻玉
有學生發郵件給我，他說他喜歡課余翻閱《紅樓夢》《麥田里的守望者》等名著，不曉得明星八卦，也不關心成績排名，和同學們往往話不投機，覺得自己很孤獨。我回信告訴他，有一首歌叫“孤獨的人是可恥的”，它錯了，應該是“孤獨的人是高貴的”。
一些人總把“孤單”與“孤獨”混為一談。孤單，基本上指形體而言：煢煢孑立，形影相吊。孤單，會產生精神上的寂寞、思念，往下走，便是無聊;往上而去，才是孤獨。但很多人其實上不了那個層次。孤獨，基本上是精神層面的。因為有些人，即使他置身于人群中，他也是孤獨的。比如魯迅，在一個滿是沉睡者的鐵屋子里，仍要孤獨地吶喊幾聲。
孤獨，意味著與眾不同。當一個社會，“舉世皆濁”“眾人皆醉”時，你仍然保留清白保持清醒，你可能被世俗邊緣化了，但你卻擁有了一顆高貴的靈魂。有些人，在人生之路上，注定要孤獨前行，獨自承擔一切。北宋仁宗時，有個宰相叫呂夷簡，位高權重，濫用私人，朝廷腐敗不堪。百官都巴結阿諛他，偏偏有個人向皇上連上奏折，檢舉呂夷簡。那個人便是“先天下之憂而憂，后天下之樂而樂”的范仲淹。檢舉的下場自然不妙，他被貶官，還差點丟了性命。但是范仲淹仍然無怨無悔，他說自己“寧鳴而死，不默而生”。一千多年后，他的同鄉林昭實現了這個諾言。林昭，北大才女，在大饑荒時，她調查民情，寫信給中央領導反映民間疾苦。結果，她被視作“反革命分子”，被捕入獄。在獄中，她仍用血書為自己辯白。最終，她于1968年被槍決，年僅36歲。
無論范仲淹，還是林昭，他們當時面臨的困境，是蕓蕓眾生們也面對的，但為何只有他們站了出來，并且說了出來?因為他們胸中有一種叫良知的東西，不斷撞擊他們的心坎，使得真理如杜鵑啼血般喚出。當年，范仲淹的朋友勸他不要做“一只專門叫喚的烏鴉”，只管自己吃喝便好;林昭的親友也勸她不要做“碰石頭的雞蛋”：他們在人生道路上是孤獨的。然而，時過境遷，大浪淘沙之后，他們的精神終于閃出了高貴的光芒。
夜深人靜的時候，有人在庸庸碌碌，有人在紙醉金迷，而我，更愿意泡一杯茶，思考一下“我們是誰?我們從哪里來?要到哪里去?”，寫點文字。那封回信的最后，我寫道：“做一個精神明亮的孤獨者吧!走自己的路，讓別人去說吧!”
行路人生
我在天光初透的草舍醒來，只有我一個人。我躊躇著，不知是在這里等待抑或獨自上路。我面對著蒼?；囊?，大聲道：“如果你想走得快，一個人走;如果你想走得遠，一群人走。那么你告訴我，該孤獨上路還是結伴而行?”荒原里一片岑寂。獵獵風聲似要撕魂裂魄。
“你的心意我無從知曉。但我勢必選擇孤獨上路。”你的聲音冉起，震得我驚喜交加。我溯著你的聲音之源，憶起你筆下祥林嫂的凄慘與抗爭。
你說，凡是一人有了新主張，得了贊同，是促其前進的;得了反對，是促其奮斗的。若吶喊于生人前，而生人不語，既非贊同，也無反對，這是怎樣的悲哀啊。你于是以之為寂寞。我了解你的抗爭。在那樣一個黑暗年代，你以筆為戟，獨自上路，竟生生地把黑暗撕出一片光明來。國人在光亮中驚醒。你走得比世人
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都快了些，你路上的寂寞亦如夜夜搓揉靈魂的猛獸。你的孤獨只被你在拈筆一笑中了然。你用筆，用鮮血，勇擔當一切的勇氣，為世人引路。你身后的一群人，也因此走得更快，更快。我對著荒野，微笑著說：“先生，你是勇者。”
“當眾人齊集河畔高聲歌唱生活，我必定返回空無一人的山巒。”我坐在地上，聽著海子微微的吟誦。
你說，我不愿與他人在熙攘中前行，我寧愿獨自踏上心靈之路。無關快慢，無關遠近，只愿收割路的幽深，面朝大海，春暖花開。我了解你這種“只可自怡悅，不堪持贈君”的心境。你在一曲排簫中走上自己的路途。一如那籬落菊花、梅妻鶴子。你以身奏的梵音，是誘人入夢的，只有執著于心靈之路的人才夢得進去。清茶布衣，麝香酴醾，樂得出世客的逍遙。
荒野里回聲漸起，從“獨居其澗，碩人之薖。吾寐宿歌，永矢弗諼”，【應是“考盤在澗，碩人之寬。獨寤寐言，永矢弗諼。”
(《詩?衛風?考盤》)意思為：敲盤取樂山溪旁，賢人寬宏而大量。獨睡醒來自言語，此中樂趣永不忘】到“世間權錢燒似火(應是：從聽世人權似火)，不能燒得臥云心”;從“眾人之途，當為遠行”到“我與世界一同上路”。我在一片響聲中釋然。
行路人生，總須有些甘愿領受寂寞獨自開路的個人，他們走得快，經受的磨難也更多，但他們不僅覓得本心，也為后來的結伴行人開辟出小道。一群人相互扶持，勢必走得更慢更遠。正是這樣一群人，壘起了人類文明的金字塔。
我拾起背包，決定孤獨上路。
點 評：
這是一篇議論性的散文，文章脈絡清晰，開頭寫了自己的躊躇：“不知是在這里等待抑或獨自上路”。中間用第二人稱寫了魯迅和海子的啟示，結尾再寫“我拾起背包，決定孤獨上路。”文章緊緊扣住題目“一個人走”與“一群人走”的關系來寫。文章既展現了作者廣闊的閱讀面，作者對魯迅、對海子都有深入的了解，對他們的作品、對《詩經》等經典也有獨到的體會;文章還展現了作者深厚的語言功底，比如“在那樣一個黑暗年代，你以筆為戟，獨自上路，竟生生地把黑暗撕出一片光明來。”“你走得比世人都快了些，你路上的寂寞亦如夜夜搓揉靈魂的猛獸。”等語句就非常形象生動，非常有感染力。(評分：58分)
孤獨者，自遠方
孤獨，是人生而具有的本性。孤獨是一條黑暗的鐵軌，你永遠不知道前面會有什么，毀滅抑或光明。有人說：“如果你想走得快，一個人走。”時代的先驅與社會的推進者是走得快的人。他們都是孤獨者。
為何?因為沒有世俗繁瑣的牽絆，沒有與同伴內訌的機會，他們孤獨向前，僅憑孤勇。
梵·高孤獨，身為一個藝術家，他的孤獨感尤其明顯，人們無法理解他的作品。貧困、饑餓將他壓迫得發瘋，用手術刀為自己刻下最后一筆。但是一億七千萬的《向日葵》卻證明他的水平比同期作者前進幾許，他不是瘋子。他只是一個孤獨行前于其他畫家的人。
孤獨者往往不能得到當時世人的理解，因為他們的思維方式高于現世，不能
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被固定的先入為主的民眾所理解與支持。孤獨的先行者便會從內心感到一種難以驅散的陰霾，只能埋首于他們孤獨的事業之中。愛因斯坦性格孤僻，小
時曾被老師責罵不可理喻，卻提出了相對論這個偉大的觀點;司馬遷蒙受奇恥大辱，在眾人不齒之下，含淚揮就一部坎坷壯闊的史詩;哥白尼堅持真理的火炬不會熄滅，提出的日心說不被世人理解，便用生命去推動真理的前行。
所以，瘋子是孤獨的，天才也是孤獨的。
真正孤獨者是堅貞于自己的內心，抵得住誘惑，淡泊以明志，寧靜以致遠。居里夫人將獎牌當成給孩子的玩具，錢鐘書謝絕記者采訪，他們需要的是專心“坐冷凳”的孤獨與安靜。哪怕“發明大王”愛迪生一生發明數不勝數，但他在晚年浮躁，喜愛名利，也就算不上是一個真正的孤獨者。
孤獨者在引領技術走向，推動社會發展的同時，也要注意民眾的“同化”。人的性格中隱約有群體意識，會理所當然地少數服從多數，孤獨者要不有舌戰群儒的本領，就要有充耳不聞的本事。很多人本是一個人走，被呼喊幾聲，便成了蕓蕓眾生的一員。所以孤獨者“高處不勝寒”，少而珍貴，受到世人的敬仰或是不解。
如果你想走得快，請一個人走吧。成就大業的人總得忍受常人不能忍受的孤獨，苦心孤詣，不迷失于眾。孤獨者，自遠方。
點 評：
文章很好地詮釋了“孤獨”和“遠方”以及他們的關系，通過時代先驅梵·高、愛因斯坦、司馬遷、哥白尼等不被人理解的孤獨以及他們取得的成就，得出了“瘋子是孤獨的，天才也是孤獨的”的觀點。又用居里夫人、錢鐘書的事例說明孤獨者“抵得住誘惑，淡泊以明志，寧靜以致遠。”并且用愛迪生來說明什么是正真的孤獨者，全文觀點新穎深刻，富有辯證性，材料豐富典型，有說服力，語言表達流暢。評分：(53分)
上 路
風繼續肆虐，梨花飄落一地。一柄折扇，鐫上寥寥數語，提上一把繚竹青燈，披起長袍，就這樣，上路了。
世上紛擾，諸事冗余，我孤身地出發，只影地前進。我認為無牽無念，方能如那風一般疾速地前行。我以為我是驕傲不可一世的。
如果想走得快，就一個人走。
陳鷗說，夢想是注定孤獨的旅程。我們各有各的路途，我唯有孑然一個，握緊心中一支未滅的燭火。我的生活很清凈，一個人在晨風里起床，踩著一地的靜謐，上課時安靜地疾書，課間捧上一株青綠，于陽光下享受溫暖的刺骨。我一個人奮斗，無所顧慮，跌倒了，自己爬起來，拍拍塵土繼續上路。一個人的時候，可以冷靜地人之自己的腦與心，淡然地在路途的跌宕里學會自己光合作用，唱歌給自己聽，腳步飛快只因無所羈絆。我不過是想要走得快一些，再快一些，離我期待的遠方近一些，更近一些。所以我選擇孤單上路。
而我終究發覺這是不必的。孤獨的心太烈，快然卻如長眠般清苦，而且始終其實是逆著風前行。因而我割裂了黑白的世界。
相比走得快，我更渴求能走得遠。
路上是需要攙扶的。因而我終于愿意與你們并肩戰斗。我接受著你們用你們
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的生命刻寫在我生命力的華彩。當我跌倒了，你們為我停下自己的腳步，伸出手來，只為了攙扶我一把;當我又重新站起來了，你們用厚實的手掌推我一把，讓我繼續前行;我心里的燭火滅了，你們替我拭去燭淚，又添上更亮的火光;我的孤獨寂寥，我們一起干干杯，都給吃掉了;我開始覺得，你們帶來的溫暖像為我雙肋插上羽翼，我從而得以飛得更高遠。那么，親愛的，你們教會了我成長也教會了我愛，你們與我一并上路，然我看見了從未瞧過的世界。
你們是我新的燭火。我的路因而更閃耀。
攜手的并進，就能相互勉勵著走得更遠。
“從前啊，我以為我是神，我揮舞我手中的巨刃，斬下無數的光榮。我以為我能越走越快，我以為孤獨是往前走最大的力量。風繼續肆虐，而梨花落滿地，卻仿佛兩個契機都不需要，仿佛那就是本能，我摒棄了孤寂，和我愛的人們一起繼續上路。我看見我的折扇就此添綴了不同的色彩，我的長袍飄揚得更為優雅。所以我還能走得更踏實更綿遠更光鮮，”我說，對著鏡子里蓬頭垢面的時間，“羈絆反而讓我、讓當下的我走得更遠。”
又或者，其實孤寂無罪，歡騰無罪，不同的只是我視野的盡頭是否一直鞭長莫及。而我，當下，我寧可在我江郎才盡之前，在我與你們變得白頭如新之前，為了能走得更快更遠，而執子之手，慳然上路。
點 評：
這是一篇融抒情和說理于一體的散文，文章用散文的筆調，寫出自己的情感，抒發內心的感受，前半部分“一個人走”，后半部分寫“攜手的并進”，走得更遠。全文中心明確，重點突出，第一人稱的運用，使感受的表達更真切，更形象。本文語言精練生動，比如“可以冷靜地人之自己的腦與心，淡然地在路途的跌宕里學會自己光合作用”、“我心里的燭火滅了，你們替我拭去燭淚，又添上更亮的火光”、“你們帶來的溫暖像為我雙肋插上羽翼，我從而得以飛得更高遠”等語句，都表現出作者深厚的語言功底，也加強了說理的形象性。(評分：53分)
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